rat attack!!

angeltail yelped as a huge rat jumped on her " help!!" she cryed as 2 more join is

"A thunderclan cat, ummm... I am coming just wait!" Brambleclaw called over to her. She ran over to the rats and threw them off of angletail, letting her free. " Hurry! there are more coming!" Brambleclaw began to race away.

Angeltail followed she was bleeding bad from her sholder

"Lets get you back to camp! What where you doing so close to the thunderpath? Luckly i was by fourtrees and could hear your yelping!" She lead the wounded thunderclan warrior back to the thunderclan camp. I hope i dont get in trouble for this by my clan or theirs!Brambleclaw thought as she trotted along.

i--i was hunting " angeltail replyed weakly

Spottedstar pushed aside the reed grass and cattail as she stepped out onto the water-slicked rocks. The stone, black and smooth beneath her paws, almost sent her into the river. The RiverClan leader kept her balance easily enough though as she hovered over the water's surface. Her reflection shimmered on the water; disturbed only by the gentle wake of the moving river water... And the many black blurs that moved beneath the wave crests. Spottedstar shot her paw into the water and then her head, making a quick and sudden movement that barely even disturbed the river's momentum. She found a thin, black fish in her jaws when she raised her sodden head out of the clear water. She placed the dead creature at her paws as she heard the yowls of a warrior across the river. Forgetting her catch, Spottedstar went to wade in the shallows; searching the opposite shore for cats. She found none. Stymied, she stood motionless in the water as the tadpoles and minnows swam around her paws.

(that's some good writing there, if you ask me x3)

angeltail limped back to camp she had a deep gash on her sholder and alot of bad cuts from the fight fith the rats

" 3 of thim..thay attacked me"angiltail said weakly

angeltails sholder gave out she fell down she was to weak to get back up

sunset moned in pain

" i dont know i just wato know why thos rts attacked me i dident evin herre or smell thim "sunset sighed weakly

i Smelt Events and blood...lots of blood. i thought i would check it out so i went on a investigating party peacefully causing no harm

The RiverClan leader stepped out of the water as she moved further downstream. Spottedstar lapped at the water then, refreshing herself and quenching her thirst. She paused as the water soothed and cooled her dry throat. Shaking her pelt, she put a paw into the water, no longer hunting. She stepped into the river tide once more. Then an awful smell hit her. She wretched dryly from the stench. Shaking her head, she looked further down the river in search of the source. A piece of carrion floated in a pool that was cut off from the main river due to the thick reed grass. There was more than one carrion. Rats, dead and pungent with odor, littered the shore here. Spottedstar leaped back, startled. Aghast at what to do, she thought briefly before running back to camp to warn her warriors to stay away from the river and reed grass.

angeltail moned in pain

Wolfrun started when he saw Spottedstar run into camp. He looked about camp for his sister, but didn't see her. She was already at the leader's side, questioning her along with a few other warriors. Wolfrun waited impatiently for Spottedstar to make whatever announcement she was planning to make.

"ow!" angeltail cryed