FuryStar lay in the clearing feeling ill and sick.
"a-neeee-wohn" he meweod trying to ask for help.
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1st person from now on
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i slowly tried to get up but i cudnt. it was impossible,
i fell heavily on my wounded flank "miwse donk" i squealed.
all then i started coughing terribly, its not the sort of cough you
would like. i slowly unnoticingly fell asleep
"FuryStar, y-oouuu hh-a-vv--e Grreee--nn-cou-gh!" i heard robinwing demand,
i sunddenly leapt up in terror and found my self limping on the floor *COUUGH COUGH*
"help!" i protested as RobinWing sprang towards her herbs. she started to chew on some
herbs as i gave a cough sending out alot of blood, "give me love baby Eaagglehard!!" i shouted as loud as i can
and i heard fast pawsteps approaching.i looked up to see EagleHeart coming "Yes?" he asked "You will be leader
until i have cured and... call GoldenTail to... tell... the other clans... i am losing my life by green-co-" i squealed.
"they should be at the battlefield...still" i slowly finished
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"i have come in peace" goldentail slowly greeted
"furystar has sent you a message."
"WE DONT CARE ABOUT HIM, HE WILL DIE!" PureStar growled
"well the message is that...he is dying and is almost dead , he has terrible greencough
and robinwing didnt have enough cobwebs... this caused him to get infections in his wounds.
he is losing a life" GoldenTail slowly said
"a-neeee-wohn" he meweod trying to ask for help.
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1st person from now on
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i slowly tried to get up but i cudnt. it was impossible,
i fell heavily on my wounded flank "miwse donk" i squealed.
all then i started coughing terribly, its not the sort of cough you
would like. i slowly unnoticingly fell asleep
"FuryStar, y-oouuu hh-a-vv--e Grreee--nn-cou-gh!" i heard robinwing demand,
i sunddenly leapt up in terror and found my self limping on the floor *COUUGH COUGH*
"help!" i protested as RobinWing sprang towards her herbs. she started to chew on some
herbs as i gave a cough sending out alot of blood, "
and i heard fast pawsteps approaching.i looked up to see EagleHeart coming "Yes?" he asked "You will be leader
until i have cured and... call GoldenTail to... tell... the other clans... i am losing my life by green-co-" i squealed.
"they should be at the battlefield...still" i slowly finished
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"i have come in peace" goldentail slowly greeted
"furystar has sent you a message."
"WE DONT CARE ABOUT HIM, HE WILL DIE!" PureStar growled
"well the message is that...he is dying and is almost dead , he has terrible greencough
and robinwing didnt have enough cobwebs... this caused him to get infections in his wounds.
he is losing a life" GoldenTail slowly said
Last edited by FuryStar on Sun May 11, 2008 8:17 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : i didnt finish it. >.<)