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1TAKEING A BREAK! Empty TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 11:03 am

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Setting :- border of Riverclan and Thunderclan.
The clouds have covered the sun lit sky, making it dull. it's drizzeing slightly.

Obviously use your warrior cat.
:3

NO GM
NO PP
& BE FARE!

ok!

2TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Intro Tue May 27, 2008 11:34 am

Moonstar

Moonstar
Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

"Uh Moonstar..." Dapplenose said as she approached the leaders den, "It is time for the dawn patrol.
"I will go myself today, since there has been evidence of some STUPID dogs on our territory. Dapplenose, can you take care of a second patrol? By the ShadowClan border?"
"Sure thing Moonstar!" she said.

Moonstar patrolled by herself to make sure she was alone so she could have a private meeting with Purestar, leader of RiverClan. She wanted to finally tell her that they were siblings, well, if she didn't find out herself. Moonstar hoped Spottedbelly would be there too because she was the third sibling.
Her lithe, smooth, creamy pelt glided through the tall undergrowth as fast as a cheetah. She could scent so many things: rabbits, mice, squirrels, fruit, and the worst smell; JAKE dog . She paused to investigate a tree that a dog had marked it's territory on, "Ughh! That smells horrible!" she mumbled to herself.

After a few minutes, she had finally approached the RiverClan border, but no one was in sight so she patiently waited in a tree, hoping another patrol wouldn't scent her.

Before long, it started to drizzle rain. But at least Moonstar had the shelter of an oak tree. She heard voices off in the distance, coming from RiverClan's side of the border. She could only see Spottedbelly, Stoneheart, and Sandclaw. She really wanted to meet with Spottedbelly, but there was no way with the other two around. She let them pass, not making a sound.
She had to have been out for hours now, and she heard a ThunderClan patrol, probably searching for her.
'MOONSTAR! MOONSTAR!' yelled Leopardtail. Finally they passed, since her scent was covered by the rain.



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3TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 11:44 am

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Her body weaved through the tall grass and oak. Her dark markings moved evenly with the rythem of her muscles, her light brown paws were torn but moved quickly underneith her. Which let her sleek body move swiftly. The blood from her pads tracked behind her, giving way to her clan wich way she was headed.
'Don't do this Purestar! Please don't do this to yourself...' Sweetdreams's voice rang in her ears. Her eyes clouded and dull, turning to even solid slits. Her vision began to blur and her nerves began to numb. Though she was determined to reach the river. Every rock she bumped into felt like nothing to her. Her eyes now dialated. She misplaced her paw, falling from a high rock. As she landed all her nerves came back to feeling. She sent out a shirll cry. Pain vibrating in her body.


Ooc: ugg i write to weird ):

4TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 11:47 am

Moonstar

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Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

Moonstar finally saw Purestar fumbling over the river like she was badly wounded. She checked the area for any other scents then dashed over to help Purestar.
'Are you ok?' she asked?

ooc: writers block B
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5TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 11:49 am

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Purestar's eyes slowly turned to see Moonstar, relief filled inside her. 'Yes...' she hesitated slightly. 'Moonstar what is this all about, my clan has probably already sent a serching patrol for me.' she asked softly.
'especially with all the JAKES dogs around.' she hissed.

6TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 11:54 am

Moonstar

Moonstar
Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

'Well it is surely important. Let's get some shelter first, from all the rain of course.' she said with a caring tone of voice. They sheltered in the same lily bushes nearby, thorny but safe. 'Before I tell you, I have to tend to the wound on your leg.'

Before Moonstar was a warrior, she spent much time in the medicine cat's den with Rainwish, so she knew the basic herbs and berries.

7TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 11:59 am

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Purestar nodded and whinced at the pain her leg brought her. She sniffed the air and screwed up her face wrinkled her noise at the taste. 'UHHH JAKE AND JORDAN NEED TO TAKE A BATH MORE OFTEN DAWGGG!''Uh. All I smell is dog now. What has become of it?' she asked softly.

8TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:06 pm

Moonstar

Moonstar
Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

Moonstar used Lavender to cure her fever, and poppy seeds to calm her. The the nasty scent of dog overwhelmed the small area. 'I definetely scent dog, should we shelter in a tree instead?' she asked, hoping it wasn't real.

9TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:07 pm

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Purestar nodded wearily, getting to her shaky legs. 'You know your herbs well.' she said with a glimer of hope in her eyes.

When she spotted an up rooted tree she lay down underneith it. Her paws ached.

WRITERS BLOCK!

10TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:14 pm

Moonstar

Moonstar
Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

Grief clawed at Moonstar's heart to see Purestar in such a weary state. Even though Purestar wasn't even close to dieing, she could scent death nearby. 'Purestar, I feel something isn't right here, can you hop on top of that rock and get into that oak tree? I will come right after you.' she asked. Fear and grief tingled in her paws.

11TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:15 pm

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Purestar's heart ached. She could scent trouble approaching. 'Moonstar whats going on.' she asked, her eyes now wide with panic as dog scent filled her lungs.

12TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:17 pm

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ooc: hawrr i love our plot >:D

13TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:18 pm

Moonstar

Moonstar
Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

'I am not sure, but I know dogs are coming. There isn't time to get help either!' she exclaimed.

14TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:21 pm

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Purestar's eyes widend with fear. 'No! Please! Go first. Your like a sister to me!' she squeeked. Her fur bristled with tension.
'prey prey' Purestar heard off in the distance. 'Moon hurry!' she cried out. Tears filling her eyes. She felt the ground tremble, the pebbled on the earth vibrated softly.
'There coming!' she yowled.

15TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:25 pm

Moonstar

Moonstar
Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

Before either of them had time to scramble up the oak, three enormous black shapes broke through the thorn barrier and grabbed Purestar by the scruff. Moonstar launched at the filthy creature with her claws sheathed. She seemed to be twice as powerful, as if StarClan were fighting with her.

16TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:28 pm

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Purestar's eyes turned to thin slits. 'GET THE CROW FOOD OFF ME BITCH' 'Moon!' she screetched as she was thrown into the air, blood spewing from her neck. She slowly got up from the ground, bleeding from her heaving sides. 'Moonstar!' she yowled.
She soon reared up with all her strength, attacking the dog from every side. Biteing deep into his fluffy matted scruff, the taste making her even more enraged.

17TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:33 pm

Moonstar

Moonstar
Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

Moonstar had actually managed to drive away the smaller dog. She once again, flew at the largest dog and bit deep into it's filthy neck. Once she got a chance to breathe she was knocked to the ground by the other dog. It stared a hole in her face and she was as frightened as a mouse being hunted. 'Purestar! Purestar!' she yelled as she felt the wincing blow from the dogs massive fangs right into her neck.

18TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:38 pm

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'MOON!' she yowled. Purestar's eyes clouded, fully dialated. 'SCREW YOU FAGS I HATE YOU B***ch ASS DOGS OMFG IM GUNNA KILLA YOU!''No...!' she hissed, soon rearing over to the larger dog. She ran under him and latched to his under belly. striking with ferious blows. Soon breaking through to his ribs.
She raked at his bone, bit at his neck, and scratched his eyes till they were sockets.
The dog yelped in pain and fell to his side, quivering in random spazims until he lay motionless.
'Moonstar!' Purestar wailed as she ran to Moonstars side. 'Stay with me! Please!' she cried in pain. Her tears shadowing Moonstar's face.

19TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:43 pm

Moonstar

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Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

'Purestar, I will walk in your dreams, as in Jadepaw's and Spottedbelly's. I will never forget you. Goodbye my sister...' she said as she could feel her life drain into the paws of StarClan. When she was fully spirit, she touched noses with Purestar, and her mother Whiteflower helped her make the long journey to StarClan.

20TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 12:51 pm

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Purestar's pupils turned to the color of her eyes, as she lay there motionless in the pool of blood with Moonstar's body. 'Sister...' she whispered to herself over and over again. Her fur bristleing all over her body. 'Siss-' she couldn't speak, her throat burned and her wounds bled deeply.
Her eyes rolled into the back of her head, her head fell into the pool of blood. She had entered the dream world. 'Moonstar! Oh starclan where are you!' she yowled, running intot he blackness. Tears streaming down her face. 'Don't leave me!' she yowled. Her voice hoarse and full of sadness.
Her wounds leaving bloody tracks behind her. 'Moon!' she screamed. Then her eyes shot open. She realized she was still in the bloody mess. Her chin rested upon Moonstar's soft scruff. She gripped it tightly and dragged her across the log, over the river.

Purestar entered Riverclan center holding Moonstar tightly, her eyes still emotionless. As other cats came to see what the fear scent was she sat Moonstar's corpse on the rock. 'May all cats-' she cut off as her voice choked. 'Everyone here now!' she howled in rage. 'I-' she tried to speak, but at the sight of Spottedbelly- her sister. She couldn't say a word.

21TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 2:19 pm

Moonstar

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Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

Moonstar spoke in her ear, 'Do not feel grief. I am still here with you always.'

22TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 2:27 pm

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Purestar bit her tounge and held her breath. Her ears began to ring. 'Don't feel greif. I am still here with you always.' she whispered to herself.
'But Moonstar... why didn't you tell me Whiteflower was your mother? Why didn't you tell me we were sisters...' she whispered softly. Everything around her began to blure.
'PURESTAR!' someone shouted out. Awakening her.
'I...' she began, the pain from her wounds finally stabbing her. 'I- I have some terrible news.' she whispered softly.
'YOU KILLED MOONSTAR?!' one yelled out. 'How could you!'
'Oh Starclan! Purestar you demon!' Another screetched.
'N-NO!' she yowled. 'Listen to me! You honestly think I would kill my own sister!' she hissed. Gasps of dis beleif filled the air.
'No...We were attacked. B- By dogs. Three of them.' She hesitated. 'Why didn't I just hop in the tree... then we both would have been safe.' she whispered. Thoughts swerved in her mind, causing her to tumble slightly.
As she caught her grip she spoke. 'No... You want to know who did this!?' She yowled in rage. 'FURYSTAR!' she blurted. 'He sent the rapid dogs to kill us all! One by- one.' she growled. Her eyes wild with rage, glareing every cat in the eye. She clung to the rocks edge with her claws, her tsil lashing out in every direction.

23TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 2:30 pm

Moonstar

Moonstar
Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

'Purestar, don't regret what you have done. It is my destiny. You can't undo the past, so why dwell on it?' she whispered in an angel voice.

24TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 2:34 pm

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Purestar shook her head. Gripping the moss on the rocks' edge. 'TONIGHT!' she yowled. 'Tonight we shall have a rade! EVERYONE! Queens, warriors,elders, apprentices, and our medican cat. Everyone but kits. two warriors shall stay and watch them.' she glared through the crowd of cats as yowls of agreement rose her ears.

25TAKEING A BREAK! Empty Re: TAKEING A BREAK! Tue May 27, 2008 2:37 pm

Moonstar

Moonstar
Deceased Ancestor Moonstar

'Purestar, be careful. No one is sure it was Furystar's fault. StarClan can take care of his punishment if it was.' she warned.

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